World of the Damned. (A chapters series + Custom characters.)

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  1. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    I wonder what happened to me and Gooby?

    :O
     
  2. Shadow_Folf

    Shadow_Folf

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    You are currently not in the story, as Leila and Sera's tracks have been stopped by Demon. You'll come back, don't worry.
     
  3. Gooby

    Gooby ミCutie彡 Donator

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    I probably just took you to some abandoned house to perform some kind of Satanic Ritual....
    No biggie eh?
     
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  4. KittycatplaysMC

    KittycatplaysMC

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    I'm even more exited now! ;D
     
  5. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Gooby's is starting to turn canadian.
    C:
     
  6. Gooby

    Gooby ミCutie彡 Donator

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    Say that again and I'll use you as the sacrifice...
    Can you put me sacrificing him in the story shadow c:<
     
  7. Shadow_Folf

    Shadow_Folf

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    Maybe, maybe not, it all depends on how the story flows. Remember, if no one else is going to apply/enter the character thread, then it will get very interesting and easy for me to get specific requests in, so I know my borders and such.
     
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  8. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Just a question, do you know when you are going to release the next part of chapter 1?
     
  9. Shadow_Folf

    Shadow_Folf

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    I am actually working on that right now. Each chapter will consist of three posts, each post containing AT THE VERY LEAST 3 paragraphs.
     
  10. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Okay, glad to know.
     
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  11. PyromancerMagic

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    You go gurl

    Oops, did I bump this? Hehehe
     
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  12. Shadow_Folf

    Shadow_Folf

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    Ah, good lord, I need to catch up on this. To make up for this, I will write:
    • Finish Chapter 1
    • Chapter 2
    • Chapter 3
    While I am on the plane. So sorry for forgetting of this. (Wednesday)
     
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  13. Creamcol77

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    YAY IT'S COMING! MORE STORY PLEASE!
     
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  14. jerkboy2006

    jerkboy2006 Lord of the slimes. c:

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    Speaking of world of damned....
    DAMN... THIS IS GOOD.
    WHY THE HELL AREN'T YOU AN AUTHOR?
     
  15. Shadow_Folf

    Shadow_Folf

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    Well, for one thing, I would be too young. Another thing, the words I use aren't "good," enough. Meaning I don't have the makings of an author, although I enjoy making storied and such.
     
  16. LGC PUMPKIN

    LGC PUMPKIN

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    Are you using the characters from your thread a while back called "Story Characters"?
     
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  17. Shadow_Folf

    Shadow_Folf

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    Yes, every single one of them. But I might lock the thread soon. (The character creation one.)
     
  18. LGC PUMPKIN

    LGC PUMPKIN

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    Yey
     
  19. Shadow_Folf

    Shadow_Folf

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    Alright, I decided to go ahead and finish up Chapter 1 so that it would be easier to finish Chapters 2 and 3.
    No new characters added so far. Enjoy.

    Leila and Sera gripped their knives in fear, whereas Demon showed no signs of worry, but rather than a sign of cockiness. He stabbed one of his swords to the ground and put his finger up and put it in a movement that signaled Leila and Sera to attack, in a form of mocking that is. Leila immediately charged for the throat, while Sera attempted to move behind in order to analyze anything they may not know of him. Demon took something out, and shot fire at Sera, while knocking the knife out of Leila’s hand using his sword in his other hand. Sera stopped immediately and jumped backwards in order to prevent being hit by the flames that spewed from the gun, whereas Leila attempted to use her free hand and attempt a mere punch towards Demon. Demon did not foresee this in any manner and was punched into a tree. Blood dripped from his forehead, and he brought out the gun that spewed fire, and immediately pulled the trigger, in an attempt to kill Leila. She then signaled Sera to throw the knife at Demon by using a gesture of a sort. Sera, of course, did so, and threw it at his head, while Leila skillfully dodged the fire gun’s bullet. However, the enflamed bullet hit a tree, and the fire started to spread around, tree to tree.

    *Meanwhile, on the other side of the forest.*

    Shadow watched the helicopter falling into a fiery area of the forest, while Grandpa Iroh pushed Jo out in an attempt to save him. Jo miraculously landed away from the fire, and away from the acid, while an explosion was heard where the helicopter landed. Jo looked at Shadow and gritted his teeth, while clenching his fists. “YOU KILLED THE ONE PERSON WHO SAVED ME A LONG TIME AGO. YOU KILLED THE ONE PERSON WHO ACTUALLY CARED FOR ME. YOU COLD, HEARTLESS SON OF A BITCH.” Jo screamed at the top of his lungs, while tears began to drip onto his cheek. He then took out a stuffed polar bear and gripped it. “He gave me this… So that if the day should come that he would no longer be able to take care of me… I would always have something to remember the one man that saved me from that apocalypse… AND YOU KILLED HIM.” He put the stuffed polar bear into his backpack and then charged for Shadow. “DIE YOU COLDHEARTED DEVIL!” Shadow sighed, and stated. “Your little guardian has been the one who went on the offensive. Your guardian is a fool to have done such a thing.” With that, he took his scythe and impaled it through Jo’s chest. “Grandpa Iroh… I thought you would always protect me… Looks like you will… On the other side…” Jo said, before dying with a small grin. “I suppose I shall catch up to my comrades, otherwise they may try to kill me soon.” *Sigh* “If they plan to betray me…”

    *In a dark, unknown area.*

    *Gooby takes a candle out and lights it up.* “So Nick… What do you think about my little secret area? It’s quite nice isn’t it? So… Tell me. Do you prefer to be with the devil? Or would you choose that sorry excuse of a god?..” Nick looked in confusion and replied, “Of course god! He is the savior of us all! If it weren’t for him, we’d all be dead!” Gooby looked at Nick with a malicious grin and said, “Well, there isn’t much you can do. We all belong to the devil.” Nick looked in shock. “You aren’t serious… You aren’t corrupt like those guys are you?..” “No, corrupt is the wrong word. Instead, I am just going to sacrifice you. You know the old fashioned rituals. Okay, not old fashioned, but completely different. By that, I mean, you’re going to be sacrificed to the devil, in the most inhumane form of manner. Not to mention that it is severely painful for you.” Gooby stated before tying Nick and drawing something around him. “Want to see something cool?” Gooby took out more candles and placed them in a circle around the diagram he drew. He looked at Nick and asked if he had any final words. “Yeah, I got some final words for you! Uh… Well… Hey look behind you!” Gooby just looked dead at Nick and asked, “Is that really the best you can do? Well. No point, you’re screwed over anyways.” Gooby clapped his hands and all the other candles that were unlit, were suddenly lit. Then, he began to chant something ominous, and Nick started to scream in pain and agony. “Farewell Nick, it was not nice knowing you…” A few moments after the seemingly painful ritual, and Nick dead, Gooby looked and said. “He was not worth it…”

    Shadow continued to go forward, until he sensed a departed soul. “Hmph, what in the seven hells is going on?” He went towards the area that he sensed the departed soul, and came across Gooby’s hideout, seeing Nick’s dead body, but no sign of Gooby. “So, Gooby, you went ahead with the ritual… You bastard.” *Sigh* Gooby walked out after Shadow sighed, and said, “You have to admit, he was a pain in the ass.” “That doesn’t mean you kill him.” “You’re just as cold and heartless as the devil himself Shadow, you should be glad he’s dead.” “That’s not the point Gooby, the point is; we lost another person. One that could have possibly been the savior of our world, whether or not there seemed to be hope.” “You were the one who stated we were fucked anyways, that there was no hope, just nothing.” Shadow and Gooby looked at each other with emotionless eyes. “I suppose you’re right. We might as well head to Sera and Leila.” Shadow stated. Gooby replied, saying, “I guess, that is, if they are not dead.” “I doubt it, they are far too intellectual to be dead at this state.” Shadow said before they got up. “Shadow, do you sense fire?” Gooby asked, and Shadow simply nodded and they went ahead.

    *Back at the other side of the forest.*

    Sera fell back, with many gashes of blood on her body. Leila was on her knees, panting and gasping, with the knife in her hand, blood all over her body, and Demon was just there, completely unharmed, with the pyro gun in one hand, and the sword in the other. “I told you that you were making a fatal mistake. You didn’t listen, and now you pay the price for it.” Demon stated. Sera was barely functioning, and Leila said, “You may kill us, but that will only make you corrupt like those others.” “You don’t know that. You and that sorry excuse are only girls that lived from an apocalypse.” Demon stated. Sera replied immediately afterwards, “Sorry excuse? You don’t know who you are to call me that.” Leila nodded in agreement and said, “She is right. You would be nothing without those weapons.” Demon was immediately agitated. “Why you little… Are you stating I’m weak? I’ll show you weak…” He suddenly stopped. He was looking as if he was paralyzed, and he coughed blood. “What?.. What is happening?..”

    *EDIT* I didn't add it onto the first chapter itself, because it exceeded 10,000 characters. -_- So I went ahead and posted it here.

    *2nd EDIT* Gooby, I gave you what you wanted. A devil sacrifice. :/
     
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  20. Jaina

    Jaina

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    This is amazing ^^ The beginning really hooked my interest, and the story is playing out quite well so far c: I feel like this would be really neat animated/drawn... It could a fun project to work on also, with voices and all. Though it would be a lot of work.
     
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