Eyes: Chapter 3

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  1. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    So, if you didn't read Chapter 1 or Chapter 2, here are the links so you can catch up.
    Chapter 1: http://www.itsjerryandharry.com/threads/eyes-a-minecraft-fanfic-d.17915/
    Chapter 2: http://www.itsjerryandharry.com/threads/eyes-chapter-2.18220/
    Alsooooooooooooo, if you want to be in the story, (BTW Read the story first, it will make more sense) scroll to the bottom to see how you can join in! :)

    Here is the cover photo for this chapter! (I started getting bored with drawing and forcing my friends):
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    Also: Every chapter there are going to be a pair of eyes ( ^ ) like so; and they are going to indicate a specific person's eyes in this story. Try and guess who the eyes belong to! Alsoooooo, the person's eyes who are on the cover; the story will kind of revolve around them for one chapter.

    Here are some people that I am going to include in this chapter:
    @Creamcol77 : Elemental Power: Lightning

    People in this story so far:
    @Shadow_Riolu
    @Chickenbits_ (das me C: )
    @Vaicun
    @ItsStartheFox


    Without further ado, lets begin the chapter!



    CHAPTER 3:



    Riolu wakes up in a Dark room. He is tied to a chair with ropes, as well as the other two. He wonders what has happened and where he could possibly be.
    He looks around a bit, and then he just gives up with trying to see. He actually finds it relaxing in the shadows. He hears a snorting, and then a gasp.
    "What the f-" The voice was cut off by Riolu.
    "Chicken, be quiet!" Riolu whispers.
    "Sorry!" Chicken whispers back.
    "But, we are in a pitch black room. Don't you think we could search around a bit more?" Chicken replies, quietly.
    "Hang on a second, I'm feeling a bit weird." Riolu stutters.
    Suddenly, Riolu vanishes.
    Since it is dark, and only Riolu can see in the dark, Chicken doesn't notice. Riolu tries to get out of the chair, but nothing will happen. Then without notice, Vaicuns chair starts burning.
    "ARGHH! You're chairs on fire!" Chicken says.
    "Hm? Oh wow!" Vaicun says, astonished.
    "It must be that liquid that Prof. Icicle gave us." Riolu exclaims.
    Since the fire emits light; and everyone can see, they look around scared.
    "That was Riolu's voice! Where is he?" Vaicun squeaks.
    "Im right he-"
    "ARGHH I CAN'T SEE MYSELF!" Riolu says.
    Then, Riolu starts appearing back.
    "Wowsers! Thats crazy!" Yipes Chicken.
    "Well, well, well... Looks like you're having some fun.." A grim voice murmurs.
    "Who said that?" Vaicun stutters.
    "Why, its me of course."
    And out of the Shadows appears a pony.
    "AWW! Its so adorwable!" Chicken baby voices.
    "Shut up, you scoundrel! I've had enough of you 3, even for 10 seconds!" The pony shouts.
    "Well, uh, whats you're name.." Riolu grimly says.
    "For I am the magnificent, Cream! Or CreamCol77 for my long informal name." Cream the Pony says.
    "Now, I need SOMEONE human to give me their DNA so I can transform Human again. And that is why I built Star, the mecha fox!" Cream exasperates.
    "Now that I have you're samples, I am going to transform human again! MUHAHAHAHA!"
    She gurgles the liquid and starts forming into a human like shape.
    Pooooof! She now is an evil looking blue wizard thingy.
    "I shall be off. I will leave the mecha to take care of you."
    Cream walks off, just like Nicki Minaj, for some weird reason. o-o
    Suddenly, there is a big THUMP. Bzzzzzz.. ker-schhh...Pop!
    Out of the shadows comes a fox in some weird athletic shoes and a construction headset on or something like that. She holds a baseball as well.
    "C'mere!" She lures.
    We all look down at the ropes tied to us. We look back up in sympathy.
    She emits claws from out of her and slashes the ropes off us.
    We all immeditly follow her into the darkness.

    Sorry this was such a short chapter, I was doing other things and now I wunna go to sleep.
    If you wanna be added in this story, comment you're elemental power below and you might get put in chapters in the near future.

    K BYEEE!
     
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  2. Fawn

    Fawn as if

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    When I read the part with pony Cream I was like "Kuledud3's christmas newbies much?" xD It has a part with a weird pony that takes them to a laboratory so he can transform them into ponies...xD

    Anyways good chapter, I liek et :3
     
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  3. The_Demonstar01

    The_Demonstar01 k-on most moe anime 2017

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    My elemental power will be shadow. Also call me Demon in the chapters if I get in.
     
  4. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    xD Wow
     
  5. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Alright, ... Brainstorming parts where you could come in...
     
  6. Creamcol77

    Creamcol77

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    YAY THANK YAA I FEEL SPESHUL
     
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  7. Gooby

    Gooby ミCutie彡 Donator

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    oo:
    Nicee chickeen
    you could be a writer c:
     
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  8. DMachine487

    DMachine487 dead

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    Really good, and the idea is super creative as well.
    Also, you know the drill of requesting to be added.
    Power: Either Radiation Manipulation or Light Manipulation (as in forming light-based weapons or blasts of energy)
     
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  9. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Thank you, I feel loved now :)

    u r speshul.

    Yeah, thats my dream job, and thank ye :)
     
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  10. Chickenbits_

    Chickenbits_ I love Tea.

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    Sorry for Double posting, but I thought you might like to choose you're name in the story, because I don't know if you want DMachine or DM or something along the lines of that.
     
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    DMachine487 dead

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    Good point, call me death.
     
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