Replacement. (IJAH FanFiction)

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  1. sebastiann

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    OMG, I'M A KILLER YEY
    Die
    THAT'S EXACTLY HOW I'M FEELING RIGHT NOW.
    Sorry for caps .-.
     
  2. Lethalities

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    How bout me :3
     
  3. GlowInTheDark

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    were gonna go wreck Mudkip
    also Im a deoxys and hes a mudkip, this should be pretty easy
     
  4. Miner

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    Chapter 4
    "All right guys, what's the plan? Are we splitting up to search for him in the lobby?" asked iamdeoxys.
    "Exactly. Let's split up. The officers, Yomc and I will search on the left side when we get there. The rest will search the right side. ARE YOU READY?!"I said
    "YES!" said everyone else in a shout that made my ears almost bleed.
    "THEN LET'S GO!"


    Once we got there, what we had expected to happen didn't happen at all. It had turned into a maze, filled with traps, lava, pits, stalagmites and everything else that is dangerous.
    "Where's Gooby? Gooby was supposed to get troops and come here to help us, but I guess Gooby decided not too..."
    Back in the lobby where Gooby was, the server was actually under attack.


    "MUDKIP WHAT DO YOU WANT?! WHAT'S YOUR PURPOSE OF HACKING?!" asked ItsHarry. Mudkip replied in a very low tone and insane matter "All I want is control over who gets banned and who is not. And for now, I think it is safe to say that everyone deserves to be banned, since everyone has broken rule 13 at least once. Come on, we all did at one point."
    "So if EVERYONE did, then you did too didn't you?" replied ItsHarry
    "I'm an exception, since I actually helped, unlike the rest of you sad, pathetic fools who don't know how to keep their server safe. I think it's time to replace the lobby and copy it to ruin the server's reputation. It most certainly will be funny to see all those who hate the server now because it was copied and un-original, which is what you guys are known for.
    "YOU CAN'T DO THIS!"
    "Oh, but it's already in progress dear Harry. And unfortunately, I'm taking away ALL of your Ban Hammers, Kick Hammers, Temp-Ban Hammers, and even your Demote Hammers. Won't it be fun to see your precious server you paid hundreds of thousands of dollars for fall down in just a matter of a few hours? I find it quite enjoying to watch. I brought popcorn and everything...heheh. It's time to begin the progress!"
    "THIS ISNT GOOD...JERRY GET TO THE CONSOLE AND KICK MUDKIP!"
    "Harry, Harry, Harry...tsk tsk. What will I do with you? Don't you understand? I locked the console and unfortuantely banned your precious brother. I've also abducted him and locked him up right next to me, so you can't take him from me. I would capture you too, but then that wouldn't be as hilarious as one person strangling in fear, because then the both of you can get yourselves out. My place is private, and definitely not underneath the White House."
    "...THANKS FOR LETTING ME KNOW!"
    "I shouldn't have said that..."
    Harry then logged off of Minecraft and shut off his computer. He packed lots of food, water and @MappyTurtle since he didn't want her in his closet anymore and set off!


    "Well the people we have here will have to do Miner." said Yomc.
    I agreed, and we set off into the groups I made and went to the sides. On the left side however, it was a disaster.
    "Woah guys, watch your step. There's lava EVERYWHERE!" shouted iamdeoxys. Unfortunately a few people had fallen in and melted in the lava. iamdeoxys looked up, and saw that water was coming down slowly, meaning that they had a time limit before it would reach down and drown them.
    "OK GUYS, let's hurry up, we have no time to spare! Let's go! All we have to do is apparently jump across pits with spikes, lava, then fight off the Wither and then the Ender Dragon, then deal with a redstone puzzle and we're there! And we can only do it in less than 5 minutes! Let's move people!" said iamdeoxys
    "This seems nearly impossible. How will we be able to do this?!" shouted YoshicraftMLG.
    "We have to at least try!"


    The right side however, was worse than what they had. And it had completely different and more challenging things than what the left side had.

    End of Chapter 4.
    Yes, I know it took way to long to type up this short chapter, but I had loads of projects to finish up on since school's almost over. I hope you guys understand and are enjoying the series. =)
     
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  5. GlowInTheDark

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    As long as I didn't have to do the redstone puzzle, I love chapter 4!
     
  6. Miner

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    Really? I'd say it would be quite funny for others to read your confusion =3
     
  7. ~ItzEnderman

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    I want to be in it. This is a really cool fanfiction.
    IGN: Minecraft756756
     
  8. neonbeta101

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    can I be in Chapter 4?
     
  9. Miner

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    I will need your IGN.
    4 has been written already, but not chapter five, but instead in the chapter before the finale' you will have a very nice spot ;)
     
  10. neonbeta101

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    Can I Be in Chapter 5?
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  11. Miner

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    Chapter 5
    "Um, Theminer30? We have a problem. There's lava coming down fast, and my calculations predict that it'll come upon us in about 5 minutes. We also have to run through spikes, get past what seems to be Metal Sonic for some apparent reason, and then beat *reads sign* Tabuu? Who's Tabuu?" asked @Saul1337.

    "Tabuu is the final boss of Super Smash Bros. Brawl, and is extremely powerful. He one-hit KO's everything with a laser forcefield. Anyways, enough about that. remember to go in between the spikes, if you foot gets stabbed, I have health splash. If your body gets stabbed, sorry about that."

    A few got their foot cut, but the worst was @andrewswfit, who cut his right shoulder bad. I healed him up which took a second or two, then moved on to fighting Metal Sonic.


    "Finally, you're here. I've been waiting for you since the beginning of this thing, which was honestly 30 seconds ago, but let's begin. I'm sure this will be a piece of cake with my metallic armor, super-powered strength and of course, the las-"

    We quickly overpowered that blabbermouth and decided to move on. But suddenly, I saw a gem go into the hole Metal Sonic had and he quickly fired a laser like the Zero Laser in Metroid and quickly killed almost EVERYBODY. The only ones left were me, @Yomc, @_HUBBLE_, @andrewswift13 and @Ryfi.

    "Looks like you're not as powerful as you think you are. Time to be exterminated fools, and I hope you DIE IN HELL! You will now be decapitated in 3...2....."

    Back on the right side, things were going from great to ok to OH MY GOD SAVE ME NOW! The team got through the lava and spikes with ease, but then stopped momentarily at the Wither for a boss. It WAS going to be hard since it's...y'know, the Wither!

    "All right guys, let's do this slowly and steadily. Archers, get your arrows ready, swordsman, sharpen your swords for a second! Attack!" said iamdeoxys.
    "WAIT!" exclaimed @YoshicraftMLG. "I can do this in a few seconds. See, I practice fighting the Wither in the boring spare time I have when I finish an adventure map, or finish a mansion, or finish anything that's hard and cool to do. Let me handle this puppy..."


    Within seconds, he quickly sliced up through the Wither and watched it die. The nether star popped out of the Wither's decapitated body and into Yoshicraft's hands
    "Ugh, it's a bit slimier than normal. But whatever. The Ender Dragon should be a piece of cake!"


    "I thought you might say that Yoshi. You see, since the Ender Dragon is weaker than the Wither, I decided to amplify the Dragon's weaknesses, which are pretty much it's strength, health and now it can breath fire. Won't that be nice?

    The ender dragon then blasted through the wall and started to make the floor on fire. Everyone ran around in panic, hoping for someone to save them. Suddenly, neonbeta01 almost threw a splash fire potion, but then a hand came down which looked more like a fin and grabbed it before it landed.

    "Thanks for the potion" said Mudkip in a voice that got more dark and tense with every word.

    "It's too hot! WERE GOING TO DIE!" shouted iamdeoxys.

    The heat was rising higher and higher, almost to boiling water temperatures, but only that's when the iron door started to melt...

    End of Chapter 5

    The chapter was incomplete, and I don't know why. However, it is fixed now. Sorry it took so long, I had to decided the mini-boss for the side I'm on, and since smash bros 4 was coming out this summer for 3DS and winter for Wii U, I thought of Tabuu, so yeah. Thanks for reading, the story is unfortunately almost over.
     
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    Yay I'm alive! :D
     
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  13. Miner

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    Incomplete chapter 5 finally complete, sorcery about the incompletion (thanks website)
     
  14. The_Demonstar01

    The_Demonstar01 k-on most moe anime 2017

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    i don't play this game anymore yet i'm still here why do you ask, i don't know either
    Wow. such fasicinate plz add me IGN: The_Demonstar01 I'm a [VIP] btw
     
  15. GlowInTheDark

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    sorry for bump but...
    Continue the story please
     
  16. Miner

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    Chapter Six
    The heat in the room got hotter and hotter until one of the members noticed the iron door had melted because of the extreme heat. The one member shouted "Guys, the door melted! Let's GO WHILE WE CAN!" At that moment, the remaining survivors who didn't get burned to death or died because of the enderdragon rushed through the door and met a cool bathtub as their reward. They didn't find the redstone puzzle since it apparently was a mirage from the nervousness of their time limit.
    "Guys, look! The door to @ProxKipper! Let's get him!"
    "Wait!" shouted iamdeoxys. "There needs to be 15 people, but there are only 11 of us...plus I think the lava is on the other side, and there's unfortunately only a couple of minutes left. I hope they make it through..."

    Back on the other side, Metal Sonic was about to fire his Mega Laser.
    "1...Huh?! BRRZTZRERZTJ AIH:GTOIH system32 destroyed. I thought it would make me go faster...NNNOOOOOOO!" and with that, Metal Sonic blew up into pieces.
    "Come on guys, let's go while we can! The lava's almost gonna drop, and we can't give up now!" I shouted.
    "What's the point? We have two minutes to beat Tabuu, and you said he has a 1-hit KO weapon. Why should we do it now? Let's face it, it's all over. We failed." said @_HUBBLE_.
    "Guys, don't give up...I know his weakness! It's his head! It's pretty big, and one of his attacks is all on his head, so while he's like that, then we can kill him!"
    "Why didn't you say so?!"
    That's when we set off. We prepared to face Tabuu and came into his room. @andrewswift13 punched Tabuu in the head, but that's when we dropped our mouths into astonishment.
    Tabuu was just a cardboard drop meant to distract us.
    It worked.
    There was only 10 seconds to get to the door and meet the other team. I rushed to the door carrying everyone in my hands as fast as I could. But I forgot one person.
    I forgot Ryfi. It was too late to go back for him. He was so quiet and calm that I didn't even see him.


    "Dude, we have 11 people. How many do you guys have?" asked iamdeoxys.
    "We would've had 5, but now we have 4..." sobbed Yomc. It was the first time I actually heard him say something, rather hear him cry. A lot of people started to sob too, but I realized we needed to move on. The rest of everyone who has sacrificed their knowledge and their lives for us, their deaths can't go in vain. They have to be taken into advantage and we had to use them. That's what we did. We entered the door with only 15 people left when we started out with 100 and set off.


    "Got any ideas on where Mudkip is hiding Mappy?" asked ItsHarry. Unfortunately Mappy was asleep so he put her back in his truck. He was going to drop her off at an airplane to "Australia" then set off. He got to the airport fast, droppe dher off like nothing happened. So finally, now he was setting off on finding Mudkip. He thought of where a Water type would live. Underwater! But where? Since he just started to play Pokemon Emerald, he thought of how tropical Hoenn was. The first thing that came to his mind was the nearby ocean with a rainforest nearby. He drove there and searched underwater.
    "Dang it, I can't find anything unusual." said Harry. Suddenly, he heard Jerry's cries from deep in the ocean to his right. He got a boat from the free boats deck and decided to row to his brother's voice. When his voice sounded loud and clear, he saw on the land that there was a base there.
    "Huh, guess I forgot that Mudkip's evolved form is a Water-Ground type." He then started to go into the base and started looking for ItsJerry.


    End of Chapter Six.
    Sorry this took too long guys. I just took a break for it, and when I was ready to make another, it was on a far away page and I didn't want to bump it. Now the end is almost here, the finale is Chapter Eight.
     
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