Hope at worlds end (IJAH Fanfiction)

*Gonna edit my Post xD*

 

Some screen caps of chapter 2 :p the first one may be a bit disturbing.. enjoy?


Peaceful district riots




Harry losing his mind

 

Beautiful ;n;
marry me plz

 

Chapter 3 :D Not written by me, buy by @Heatdude Da Waffle ! :D he is helping me by writing parts of the story. Anyways enjoy the latest segment!

Claire sat in a chair next to the window watching Demon. "Beep.... Beep.... Beep.... Beep...." The heart monitor was the only noise in the otherwise dead-silent. "Come on man... we're counting on you...."
John looked over from where he was sitting with his eyes shut on the other side of Demon. "How long have we been here now? I know Demon took a beating, but it's not like him to take this long. The last time he got beat it only took twenty minutes in the hospital before he was up again." John said.
"It's only been four hours, but it feels like it's been a week." Hubble said, leaning against the wall. "Where'd bunnie go, anyway?" He asked.
"Bunnie said she was going to take a break from all this. Don't really blame her. I'm getting stressed from just watching Demon." Claire said. "I guess all we can do is wait and see..."
"Beep.. Beep.. Beep.. Beep.. Beep.."

Dwg walked to the edge of the cliff, looking down on the battle field that lay before him. "Looks like we weren't early enough..." He said, looking at the bodies littering the ground, and the many others still fighting. "My gosh, it didn't look nearly this bad on the TV..." Magical said, coming up to stand next to Dwg. Turning around, Dwg snapped his fingers to get back the attention of the other staff, who were also looking at the commotion. Looking over the ranks, he counted in his head. Devin, check. Mira, check. Panda, check. Saul, check. Misfit, check. Ocram, check. Gthang, check. He counted again just to make sure, then stared at them all with a stern look. "Okay guys. This is it. Do or die, quite literally. Half the staff are missing, and on top of that, neither Harry, Jerry, or Willy are able to help us. It's just us, we're peaceful's only hope." Dwg said. "Just follow my orders, and we'll all make it through this. Ready team?"
"READY!" They all shouted back, crouching and drawing their swords to prepare for battle. "Magical, are you sure you can do this? Even after... well, you know? (the thing that happened is that Magicxx130 was an innocent casualty in the midst of the fight they're about to join)" Dwg said, looking at Magical at his side.
"Yeah.... I can do it." She said, crouching and pulling out her sword.
"Good, then let's do it." Dwg said, jumping into the battle with his team soaring behind him.

Jerry opened the door and closed it quietly behind him. Harry opened one eye from the table he lay on. "Hey, what's up bro?" He said in a weak voice. Jerry looked over at him and sighed. "Well, the doctors say they can't find anything wrong with you. They said you just need some rest and that then you'll be free to go." Jerry walked over and sat on the edge of the bed. "So, that's what they say. Now, what do you have to say?" He said, staring down Harry.
A moment of silence, then suddenly Harry's eyes flew open. "AGHHH, NO, NO! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!" He screamed, tossing back and forth in the bed. Jerry jumped up and yelled, "WILLY! GET IN HERE!" and desperately tried to hold down his brother.
Willy ran into the room, a half eaten piece of pizza dropping out of hand as he did. "What is it?!" He said, running over and grabbing Harry. "AGHHH!" Harry screamed, shaking and rolling around, trying to free himself from their grasp. "HARRY, TALK TO US!" Jerry screamed into his brothers face. "WHO IS DOING THIS TO YOU?!!"

Dwg sat against a rock, looking over the field before him. He'd never seen so many dead bodies before in his life. He turned his attention to Panda who was approaching, carrying a half-beaten body with her. Looking at her, he noticed she had a huge gash on her right leg and was limping. Other cuts and bruises covered her body. "Are you okay?" Dwg asked, nodding at the gash.
"I'm fine. This one here is special. Look." She dropped her in front of Dwg, and picked up her head. Pulling up one of his eye lids, a black eye was shown. Instead of a normal eye with a pupil and such, the entire eyeball was black. In the middle there was a seven pointed purple star. Dwg studied it carefully as Panda was talking. "All the others, we noticed, had plain black eyes. This one's got this star doo-daa goin' on." She said. Suddenly the body jumped up from the ground, looking around panicked. Dwg's instincts kicked in and he immediately jumped off the rock he was sitting on and tackled the body to the ground. Then he realized who it was: "BLUEJEANS?!" He said, staring at her with astonishment. She turned her head up slowly, staring into his eyes with a confused look. "DWG!" Panda ran over and slapped him in the face. He looked up at her astonished. "HEY, WHAT'RE YOU DOING!" He yelled angrily. "I'M TRYING TO HELP YOU!" She said, pointing towards Bluejeans. "Her eyes are what's controlling all of the others..." She said, waving her hand at the battle field littered with other players. Dwg looked back down at Bluejeans, this time at her forehead. "I see..." He said, standing up. "Get up." He said to Bluejeans. After waiting a moment and she didn't respond, he kicked and yelled, "GET UP!" Reaching down and grabber her by the shirt collar. "YOU HAVE TO LISTEN TO ME, WHAT IS HAPPENING TO YOU?!" Dwg yelled. Her body started to toss around, desperately trying to get loose. "LET. ME. GO!" She screamed, pushing Dwg off of herself so that he went flying twenty feet before sliding to a halt. "What the..."

Jerry slowly got up from the hole Harry had thrown him into in the wall. "HARRY, WHAT ARE YOU?!" He yelled, limping towards him.

Walking right up to Bluejeans, Dwg stared her in the eyes, daring her to take him, too. "WHAT. ARE. YOU!!" He said, swinging a fist at her head.

Harry caught Jerry's fist in his own, moving his hand to the side to reveal black eyes with a seven pointed purple star where the pupil should be. "Who am I?" Harry said, smiling.

Bluejeans twisted Dwg's hand so that he knelled before her. "LET GO OF HIM!" Panda yelled, running towards Bluejeans.

Smacking Willy without even looking, Harry stared down Jerry, his smile growing ever larger. "I..."

"Am..."

"REETU!" Harry screamed.

"RIEUAN!" Bluejeans screamed.

To be continued in chapter 4!

 

Why am I the one who gets beaten up? .-.

 

tl;dr

I saw 1 part
Space Core and Wheatley

I dont need to read anything else, Portal 2 references are all I need

 

I do like this story better than most fanfics, seeing as it is pretty well written, and it also is illustrated, which makes it more immersive. Good job.
Insert subtle but obvious reference of wanting to be in the story here.

 

Wow
How long did it take you to write this?

such wow

 

Just apart of the story demon :) you and i are still friends

 

Alright :P

 

I can NOT believe many aspects of this story has some things from MM: Corruption, such as the game corruption, brainwashed Crew, even Rieuan and Reetu. Did it inspire your story?

 

How the hell do you write this is 20-25 minutes? It would take me about 45 minutes, possibly more! (I am 10 though)

 

Woah this is good o.o

 

That is NOT A GOOD FAN FICTION!!




ITS AN AWESOME FAN FICTION!

 

That was amazingly awesomely awesome.

 

Chapter 4!
thanks so much for the likes :D i really appreciate it. Ill try to keep this story going as much as i can thanks to heatdude and epictntarrow for helping me with this story :) anyways enjoy the newest part of hope at worlds end.





I AM REETU! Harry yelled, Jerry moved away from harry in shock, still confused from what just happened, Just then Harry got up and ran towards the door and kicked it open in one hit, the nurses and doctors looked in horror as a deranged mind controlled patient stood there with a psycho-esque smile on his face. He then ran towards a group of nurses and in each hand, generated 1 yellow sphere and Slammed them into them it engulfed 4 of them leaving one to escape,
the one nurse rean to grab the phone to dial 911, when a sword made of dark energy sliced her in half. "Now my minions, ATTACK! no one leaves alive!!!" Reetu said to the nurses
who were now under mind control. In the other hospital room, John suddenly heard screaming and rapid footsteps."guys! i think theirs something bad happening!"john said pointing towards the hallway."Must be another emergency, it doesnt concern us." Claire said. One of the doctors ran in and said "Come with us! theres a evacuation in effect!" "Wait what! Whats happening!?" hubble exclaimed as he got up. "One of the patients has gone mad! hes taking other nurses and turning them deranged as well!" The teens got up and grabbed their weapons, John ran towards the door until claire stopped him, "Wait! what about Demon!?" She said pointing to demon in his hospital bed. "we will protect the patients! just follow us to the exit of the hospital!" the doctor said, the teens ran out of the room, claire looked back at demon still unconscious on the bed. and ran out. the doors then shut and locked as they got out. Nurses doctors and surgeons were all running towards emergency exits and taking stairs down to the first floor.

just then, hubble heard an explosion coming from down the hallway. alarms sounded and more people started running out of the hospital, "oh god, harry really lost his mind, i hope demon is okay." Claire thought to herself as she ran downstairs with the others. The teens managed to make it to the first floor of the hospital. guests, doctors and nurses were all terrified as they stood outside in the somewhat warm heat.


Another explosion occured on the 3rd floor, this time people flew out from the building and fell to their deaths "oh my god!! John said pointing, "it really is harry! Hes got a bunch of people with him!" Harry took the dead nurses and turned them into mindless minions. "FORWARD MY SLAVES, WE SHALL DOMINATE THIS WORLD!! HHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" Reetu laughed maniacally, then he and the other mind controlled nurses jumped towards the first floor and prepared for the attack. "Oh god hes even got the eyes, hes definitely not harry anymore." Hubble said in fright. Reetu looked over at hubble with a crazed look on his face. "harrys no more, hes nonexistent and soon you shall be too!! Harry then created a yellow sphere in his hands and ran towards hubble, john then ran in front of him and pulled out a Shotgun "im not gonna let that happen reetu! You may have killed me 2 years ago, but now im gonna kill you!" Reetu looked at john and grinned happily then said" with pleasure...

To be continued!

 

-insert never gonna give you up song here-

 

Im just laughing while Reading this, its so funny how people creatie stories with ;us; in it. But yo keep going i;ll read all parts unless it gets boring.